Fresh Eyes

Death

I've been working on this homework for a while and I'm having a hard time being objective. If any of you guys have a spare moment or 2 today and could lend me your eyes/thoughts/criticisms I would be grateful.

Here's a link to the flickr set with my work on it:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/poorphotostom/sets/72157625185237822/